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New music from the audiopolis admin team ....

A place where new and existing members can put links to their music without asking for specific song reviews. A musical hello.

Re: New music from the audiopolis admin team ....

Postby steban » Thu Dec 18, 2014 6:47 pm

HUD's pointed out all the semi-technical points I'd make, ceej.

It's a cool song as a whole. The slightly flat tone of the vocals at times at first surprised me, my mind wanting to sharpen them a little, especially since it's you, dude! But once I get accustomed to it, it is more an artistic decision, and it does add an altness to it, and safely away from the Doobie Brothers.

The melody is kind of Steppenwolf catchy. I like the two organs interplaying on top of that groovin' bass and rockin' drums.

Lyrics work fine, full of imagery very trippy innuendo-filled, and a little downed out feeling, which conveys a little impurity to the love song angle. That attitude goes with the delivery.

Is it your best song ever? No. But it has memorable moments and is a valid idea.
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Re: New music from the audiopolis admin team ....

Postby cjdenecia » Fri Dec 19, 2014 1:16 am

you can't handle the truth.

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Re: New music from the audiopolis admin team ....

Postby HUD » Fri Dec 19, 2014 1:03 pm

I always do assume that your note choices are conscious decisions, rather than an incompetent ear. I, as you, have thought long & hard about how we want to sing - and as I recall a cj critical comment here & there (I forget NOTHING) about my deliveries, there will probably always be some little style choices of yours that don't thrill me, like that upward curl you'll put on a phrase from time to time that pisses me off.
Would like a Pinstripish, relaxed delivery next time, eh? That's actually one of your best vocals, IMO. If you got idea for something loungey, I could help you jazz it up, in fact.
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Re: New music from the audiopolis admin team ....

Postby cjdenecia » Sat Dec 20, 2014 2:24 am

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Re: New music from the audiopolis admin team ....

Postby ingolee » Sat Dec 20, 2014 11:19 pm

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Re: New music from the audiopolis admin team ....

Postby cjdenecia » Sun Dec 21, 2014 1:00 am

uploaded to the site ....

ohhh and thanks ingo, I WILL be checking it out ...
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Re: New music from the audiopolis admin team ....

Postby cjdenecia » Sun Dec 21, 2014 1:20 am

in that context ingo, with just that guitar, I'm seeing some possible lounge treatment ... maybe - it's feeling sorta bluesy vs jazzy.

but here's one that deano and I were starting with the pinstripes when he just disappeared ... jiggafied. I always wanted to keep working with it but it just never happened. it needs to be cut down, personalized and flushed out but it has real potential.
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Re: New music from the audiopolis admin team ....

Postby ingolee » Sun Dec 21, 2014 1:23 am

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Re: New music from the audiopolis admin team ....

Postby Ailwyn Rees » Sun Dec 21, 2014 9:02 am

I'm hoping that Santa Claus will be kind to me this year, supplying me with leads, adaptors, good quality headphones, etc, so that I can take a more active part in these projects!

You guys are fun to work with!

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Re: New music from the audiopolis admin team ....

Postby Krispy » Mon Dec 22, 2014 8:37 am

What a groovy, danceable tune. Gregg's done a great job with it.

If the flatness they're all talking about is where I hear it I have to conclude that it's about those crappy ol' physical changes. The range available to you ten years ago has narrowed but you still want to venture into it. Its upper reaches are now where you have the least control, just like I do in the lower reaches.
Yet singing live, particularly covers, you never miss, except when you have to back off or squeak.

Sticking to note choices is all very well, but the casual listener isn't going to read the sleevenote where it says, 'It's meant to be like that'. Of course I'm terribly guilty of such choices, but it's still a valid point.

Don't really feel the lyrics on this one. I know you're going for unsophisticated but to me it seems devoid of any translatable emotion and tainted by cliches. No offence. (Guess I'm walking home tonight then).

I'm sure I can hear the kitchen timer going off right at the end.
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Re: New music from the audiopolis admin team ....

Postby cjdenecia » Tue Dec 23, 2014 12:03 am

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Re: New music from the audiopolis admin team ....

Postby Krispy » Fri Dec 26, 2014 8:16 am

Banter.
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Re: New music from the audiopolis admin team ....

Postby cjdenecia » Fri Dec 26, 2014 10:09 pm

banter is sooooo 2014.
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Re: New music from the audiopolis admin team ....

Postby Ailwyn Rees » Fri Dec 26, 2014 10:16 pm

...and then there were none...
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Re: New music from the audiopolis admin team ....

Postby HUD » Sun Dec 28, 2014 4:14 pm

so what's going to be in for 2015?
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