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Audio Refugees • View topic - to the Sky

to the Sky

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to the Sky

Postby slywitt » Thu Feb 05, 2015 4:12 am

The darn songs are starting to come again after a year hiding. I don't think my 60 yr old voice is up to the task anymore -although my 50 yr old one wasn't doing too well either. I'm thinking about asking someone else to sing this. Any thoughts?
It's 2 minutes long.

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Re: to the Sky

Postby slywitt » Sun Feb 15, 2015 2:14 am

Ha! I'll reply to myself. Thanks to a dear friend who did me some drums, and me doing a bit of harmony. This guy's comin' together,

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Re: to the Sky

Postby cjdenecia » Mon Feb 16, 2015 12:24 am

you can't handle the truth.

nor do you want to ...
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Re: to the Sky

Postby steban » Mon Feb 16, 2015 9:01 pm

Another strong song, sly! I liked both versions, even though there are some vocal issues, reminded me of Paul Simon's and Paul McCartney's older voices on SNL 40 last night, not as strong as once upon a time, but still pretty impressive. This one has a catchy vocal rhythm with very good lyrics. Very good.

Melody was top notch, too. I'd be mighty interested in hearing it covered by another singer, no offense intended, but good singers need good songs to shine.

The harmony vocal was shaky but on the right track.

I am not feeling the muse lately, but others are, and it is inspiring to hear cool new music still coming out of my unknown heroes here.
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Re: to the Sky

Postby slywitt » Wed Mar 04, 2015 4:04 am

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Re: to the Sky

Postby cjdenecia » Thu Mar 05, 2015 7:19 pm

you can't handle the truth.

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Re: to the Sky

Postby slywitt » Thu Mar 05, 2015 11:42 pm

...most cool!!
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Re: to the Sky

Postby Ailwyn Rees » Fri Mar 06, 2015 12:49 pm

...and then there were none...
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