Ya'll Suck

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Ya'll Suck

Postby jaymz » Thu May 09, 2013 2:59 am

Take that! Hatless!
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Re: Ya'll Suck

Postby steban » Thu May 09, 2013 11:01 pm

I liked the last one best, not to say anything bad about 1/2. And both classic not country jaymz to boot, I guess Satellite Down, very Simple Plan smooth pop emo rock, like an over organized roller coaster ride. What is interesting is the little edge the 'work in progress' adds, both restraining it in some places and experimenting in others.
everyone is in the middle
we all run at different speeds
everyone has special talents
everyone is special needs
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Re: Ya'll Suck

Postby mistertroll » Fri May 10, 2013 12:15 am

steban wrote: like an over organized roller coaster ride


May have to steal that one. Brought to mind a sculling crew-like carload with the guy at the front telling everybody when to do what.
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