Evolution of a song Part II

[jaymz]

So this is a song tentavily called Miss Olivia.

It started with a dream. Me and this ping pong asian guy were playing piano side by side, He was playing the chords, me some melody, I remember it was I IV V. I woke up, tried to record it to my phone..

http://www.dallasnetworks.net/media/mis ... Idea_1.mp3

Then, I finally actually got up, got my guitar and started fleshing out the chords and melody... the melody in my head is more of a second verse melody, so we shall see.

http://www.dallasnetworks.net/media/mis ... Idea_2.mp3

Then I was sitting on the toilet taking a dump and the drum beat hit me..

http://www.dallasnetworks.net/media/mis ... Idea_3.mp3

Then I started fleshing out the parts... with some crappy lyrics.. nowhere near done

http://www.dallasnetworks.net/media/mis ... Idea_4.mp3

http://www.dallasnetworks.net/media/Mis ... a%20v1.mp3

More to come...

And then there is a chorus...

http://www.dallasnetworks.net/media/mis ... %20v1b.mp3

[jaymz]

Hey, a video.

I look good.

[icararse]

Have you finished it yet?